canicide: (nope fuck this)
heine rammsteiner. ([personal profile] canicide) wrote in [community profile] drear 2018-07-11 03:52 am (UTC)

[ Heine takes the bottle, barely looking over before he pops the top open, already engrossed in the music. ]

The lines coming into the second bridge could use something more. Tension or energy before the resolution.

[ Finally turning back towards Eames Heine takes a swig of the drink. ]

What do you think?

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